Alternative History…What if women were in charge?
A small child, curls bobbing on a head she’s forgotten to cover with the sunhat her mother insists on, crouches down on a Roman mosaic floor in north-east Spain. Mesmerised by the purity of the black and white pattern, the craftsmanship and the tiny marble squares, she almost doesn’t hear her father calling her to the next one.
Jumping up, she eagerly runs to him, babbling questions like many eleven year olds do: who were the people who lived here, what were they called, what did they do, where have they gone?
The father, a numismatist and senior ‘Roman nut’, starts telling her about the Greek town of Emporion founded 575BC which became Roman Emporiæ in 218BC, where traders sailed in and out with their cargoes of olive oil, wine, textiles, glass and metals; where people lived in higgledy-piggeldy houses, traded from little shops; where the Roman army based its operations; where money was minted. And the people came from every corner of the Roman Empire to live and work. Boys went to schools and girls learnt to be good wives and mothers.
The little girl listens carefully to every word, sifting the information. Her hand in his, she turns as they leave, looks back at the mosaics and asks her father a final question.
“What would it be like if Roman women were in charge, instead of the men?”
Maybe it was the fierce sun boiling my brain that day, maybe I was just a precocious kid asking a smartass question. But clever man, my father replied,
“What do you think it would be like?”
Years later, in 1992, I picked up Fatherland, a thriller stirring up controversy all over Europe, especially in Germany. A political journalist, Robert Harris (who went on to write Enigma, Ghost, Archangel, Imperium, Pompeii), had written a “what if” story where Hitler had won the Second World War. His protagonist, Xavier March, a Berlin police inspector, carries out a routine murder investigation which becomes a political nightmare.
I was caught immediately by the alternative history concept: worlds opened up; history was not static; anything could be imagined. An idea I’d had as a little girl about a different world when I’d been on a Spanish holiday echoed in my head. No, I was too busy: I was a young working mother, running a household, doing the usual ‘woman juggles everything’ act at the time.
On to 2010 and my husband and I are sitting in the darkened cinema theatre, waiting for the movie to start. By that time, I’d played with words much of my life – playwright (aged 7!), article writer, local magazine editor, dissertation writer and professional translator. We pick this film, based on a popular novel, as it was the least worst on offer at the multiplex. And it has Ewan McGregor in a key role…
The film starts; the cinematography is great, but thirty minutes in we realise the plot is dire and narration hacked and chopped so many times the story is unintelligible.
‘I could do better that that,’ I whisper to my husband.
‘So why don’t you?’
We drive home, my brain bursting with an idea I had forty years ago in Spain, fuelled by Robert Harris’s alternative history and tempered by the feminism of my student days. Ninety days later, I type “The End” on page 306 of the first draft of INCEPTIO, the first in my Roma Nova alternate history thriller series.
But what to do with this typescript? I knew nothing about novel structure, goal-motivation-conflict, story arcs, or narrative thrust, nor even the terms themselves. Nor anything about publishing or the book industry. So I took the lessons I’d learned when I went back and did my masters’ in history: I researched; I asked people; I made notes; I went on courses, to conferences; I networked. I was back from a research day in London when I called into the local estate agent who was handling the sale of our house – we were moving to France. I’d known the agency owner for over twenty years, but as a business acquaintance only. We both wore sharp suits, and were models of female entrepreneurship. In one of those moments when you feel deep in your being that something significant is happening, we mutually “confessed” to writing novels.
After we’d both got over the shock and eyed each other as transformed alien creatures, she recovered first and invited me along to her writers’ circle. She urged me to join the Romantic Novelists Association New Writers’ Scheme which gave me colleagues, mentoring and friendship. A valuable lesson – you can’t write in a vacuum. We have deepened our friendship and become critique partners. I think I’m the more brutal one with the red pen and she the more grounded one.
I opted to publish INCEPTIO independently and bought in high quality services to produce a paperback that readers seem to love and a well-formatted ebook. The cover won a competition two days before launch and INCEPTIO was shortlisted fort the International Rubery Book Award this year.
But it all goes back to that little girl and the mosaics. Launching INCEPTIO in Waterstones in March this year, this was the first image I showed the audience.
“Now let me tell you the story of how INCEPTIO began under a hot sun in Spain…”
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Alison Morton grew up in Tunbridge Wells, a former spa town in South East England, and worked in the City of London, dealt in coins and antique jewellery, head-hunted chief executives, served as a reserve military officer and owned a translation company. She completed a bachelor’s degree in French, German and Economics and several years later a masters’ in history. She now lives in France with her husband.
A ‘Roman nut’ since age 11, she has visited sites throughout Europe including the alma mater, Rome. The first in her series of Roma Nova alternate history thrillers, INCEPTIO, was shortlisted for the 2013 International Rubery Book Award. The next in the series, PERFIDITAS, will be published in October 2013.
Find out more about Alison’s writing life, Romans and alternate history at her blog http://www.alison-morton.com and say hello on Facebook AlisonMortonAuthor or Twitter @alison_morton
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I had a long conversation with a man in India about how the world would be different if women were in charge. He thought it would be dreadful, as we aren’t allowed in public for one week a month (traditional in rural India, hard for us to get our head round), but we agreed that women rulers would spend more time drinking tea than dropping bombs, which would be good for the tea industry in India!
Tea would be much better! And think of all the solid networking that would get done, to everybody’s benefit!
Sounds fascinating! Just bought a Kindle copy.
Women need to be more prominent political decision makers, or the earth will soon become uninhabitable.
Thanks, JoAnne. I hope you enjoy it. I loved writing INCEPTIO and building its world. Alternate history lets people explore new, often radical, ideas which can also be a great deal of fun!
This essay fascinated me; I too am inspired to read INCEPTIO. I was touched by the father treating his daughter’s wonderful question with respect.
My father was always interested in find out more about everything. He was a numismatist and amateur historian particularly beguiled by ancient civilisations. My mother was a geography teacher, so from both sides of the family, curiosity was encouraged and answered. We were never discouraged to make connections, however unorthodox.
This is probably why I loved the whole concept of alternate history; although there is structure, the ideas have no limit.
Brilliant essay Alison. You write so smoothly, beautifully. Guess who now wants to read your novel. Thank you so much for contributing.
Sincerely,
Anora McGaha
Editor
Women Writers, Women Books
Thank you, Anora, that’s a lovely thing to say!
I hope you enjoy INCEPTIO. 😉